Face Engine

This is a really enjoyable read, especially for me as I previously didn't know anyone who has read The Zombie Survival Guide (aside from one friend who read it because ...

This is actually based on stuff that's been going on inside my head for over a week now (actually, several months, but it's become more intense recently). Constructive criticism would ...

Ouch, that was painful to read (in a way I think you desired). I'm not a very good critic, but I noticed a small typo, " rreach out and pull ...

You're the want thing in my life, That I just can't live without, I wanted to be your wife, Now I just want to scream and shout. Just noticed a ...

Some readers may remember me as someone who began to write a sci-fi story, but never got past the prologue, something which I will continue to blame writer's block for. ...

I'm really bad at writing reviews, hence why I haven't dared to send a critique earlier on (I read the first part a couple of days ago). But, seeing as ...

Thank you all very much for your sympathy and advice. Now I'm going to go into the "I don't want your pity!" mode. Hopefully I'll do something productive tomorrow :? ...

I can't seem to write anything creative all of a sudden. I think I'm suffering from major writer's block on a major scale, at a majorly inconvenient time-I've just written ...

Thank you again. I've gone over it and fixed a few grammatical errors ("Jorj'" looks more correct than "Jorj's" to me, but if you're sure...). I'm going to start writing ...

Okay, I've edited it, and I think it's a lot better now. If you still think it's missing something, or if you see any errors please say.

Yes, but by the time they meet such huge periods of time won't seem quite so huge. Certainly for the Humans, anyway, not sure about the aliens yet...

Thanks. I've fixed all the grammar mistakes. I'll probably polish it up a bit tomorrow (well, today). Hmmz, one of you has said that the gory bits need more description, ...

Thank you very much for your review. Having re-read the story, I can see what you mean about detail and "showing rather than telling". I think I didn't spend enough ...

Jak Conwee gritted his teeth as another shell fell above the bunker, blinking manically to get the thick dust out of his eyes. For three and a half days, the ...

What was wrong with Anakin? He IS Darth Vader, after all! But I agree that the new trilogy sucks (relative to the original), though I quite liked episode 3, as ...